Galactica - as commissioned by john

topic posted Tue, December 23, 2003 - 10:46 PM by  Ylmar
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just repeating the important pces of the thread :


Gotta have the capture scene
Starbuck (female) is captured, bound to a backlit table by clamps around arms and legs. Most clothing removed.

Slithely Tricia saunters into the room eying starbuck with a cool smile head tilted slightly forward.

"No, really don't mind me, just make yourself comfortable" she says in a bubbly voice.

Starbuck says nothing.

"you know, I would ask you questions, and threaten torture first but it always leads to the torture anyway now doesn't it" she pulls an index finger out of her mouth and brushes a trail of saliva on starbucks perfectly flat bare tummy playing with her belly button.

She leans down face to face, as if to kiss and with a sly smile says "I think we should just skip to the fun part then, whaddaya say?" Starbuck still says nothing but looks defiant with a hint of fear.

She turns brusquely, and goes to the control panel.

Lights click on and around the table a room is revealed that appears to have intricate columns topped with equally intricate beams leading up to the ceiling, all circling the table. But appearances are deceiving as each column and beam moves smoothly and effortlessly as large crane arms tipped with numerous odd and scary looking torture devices. They all move in unison, about ten of them, positioning their instrument tips less than a centemeter over different parts of the body. The overall visual effect is that she is on the underside of a mechanical spider that is lying on it's back and ready to "tickle" her with it's legs.

Tricia: "Lets just start off gentle we don't need to rush this, there is nothing to confess, we will take whatever we want to know out of what is left of your mind when we are done."

*****

Okay, now there are ten futuristic instruments of torture anyone can make up a function for, and many body parts to chose from. Here is the mission: ten posts of others describing in detail each torture, making it as erotic as possible and detailing Tricia Helfer's commentary but not violating the PG-13 limitations of real TV programming so that it teases and frustrates rather than satisfies the imagination.

Have fun :)
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Ylmar
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  • Re: Galactica - as commissioned by john

    Tue, December 23, 2003 - 10:47 PM
    I humbly submit these words to the noble audience, hoping that they qualify as kinky enough for the taste of those present. I pray that they will not provoke the anger of the Greatmighty Owner of this tribe, or any of his revered Acolytes. If this were however the case, please consider that they have been instigated. I would never have done this of my own accord ….
    Let me also humbly point out that any remaining spelling and grammar errors are to blame on Bill G.

    Ok …so we start from the proposed setting; Starbuck attached with ropes to a table, Tricia steering the arms to the default position.

    Tricia takes a control pad that hangs from her belt. A few swift keystrokes, and one of the spider arms moves in front of Starbuck's face. The arm is multi-jointed, but unlike the model from nature, the joints allow movement in any direction. The extremity terminates in an open half cylinder. It is silvery on the outside, dark gray on the inside, with a pattern of golden dots. 'Look closely, love,' says Tricia, 'You're going to play an important part in the renewal of an old art.' She smiles, 'The art of torture. These are new style restraints. A revolutionary design, mostly y work, if I may say.'
    A touch to the pad and two segments glide out of the cylinder's ends, and meet with a click. A soft burr, and the gray lining expands, fitting snugly on the limbs.
    The victim on the table watches, not very impressed. Tricia tilts her head, chuckles softly. 'They are revolutionary, really. This will change the whole concept of restraint.'. She touches the panel again. Four spider arms move in unison, search for limbs, for wrists and ankles. They apply themselves, and inflate their lining. Starbuck looks not very impressed. But Tricia is not in a hurry. Tricia knows what this is about, what this gadgetry does. She unties the ropes, her enemy is now only held by the spider arms. 'Are you comfy, dear? Do you want to sit up? Just do it.'
    Starbuck sits up; the mechanical arms allow her to move, within certain limits however. She finally sits with a leg dangling down on each side of the narrow table, leaning back with her hands on the surface behind her. Then she shrugs. 'Ok, it's novel, Tricia. I can see that this could come in handy, if you have a big prison and only a few guards. But this is not going to make me talk, you know. Not in a thousand years.'
    Tricia leans against the table; her belly touches the flesh of her prisoner's hip. She laughs softly.
    'No, this way it will not make you talk. This is the reward mode. There are other operating modes. The first one is the Freeze mode. If I select that, you are supposed to freeze. If you move, even a single millimeter, the restraints will punish you.' A touch to the path. 'Try to move, please.' With an indifferent look on her face, Starbuck moves her right foot. Instantly, her expression changes. Her eyes open wide, she cries out, a cry of anguish and pain, and looks bewildered at Tricia.
    'Cute system, no ? Just lie still, very still, and all will be well.'
    Tricia puts her hand on a smooth thigh, and starts to caress the warm flesh. Her prisoner closes her eyes, Tricia smiles. This will be fun. Her hand wanders on. Involuntarily, Starbuck moves. The restraints react, the electric generators send their pulses through her body, and she screams again.
    Tricia laughs, and watches how Starbuck breathes heavily, recovering from the painful shocks. 'Ok, Star, I should not have done that. I took you by surprise, didn't I? I'm so sorry.'
    Starbuck hisses back 'Be damned, dirty bitch. I'll get out of this, I swear it.'
    'There is a chance, I admit it. But we will discuss that later. Now I'm going to pinch you, for calling me a bitch.' Tricia takes a little fleshy bud between two fingers. Then she smiles at Starbuck. 'Are you ready ? It will be all right, as long as you don't move, see ?' Starbuck's entire body hardens, eyes clenched shut, as she prepares for the pinch. But it does not come. Instead, there is a soft pulsing pressure, a caress, and a fingertip gliding over sensitive places. Starbucks eyes open, she looks bewildered, opens her mouth to speak. Tricia waited for that moment, and with Starbucks guard down, she pinches her as hard as she can.
    The pain is so intense that Starbuck tries to push Tricia's hand away, and forgets about the restraints. When the shocks hit, they are so painful that she cannot scream, not breathe even. Her body arcs up, in terrible spasms, then falls back on the couch again. Now she lies still, softly whimpering, tears in her eyes.
    Tricia looks at her, with a smile on her lips. Pain is simple. To resist pain is simple, is normal, and being unable to resist such pain is accepted, socially. There is nothing humiliating in that, nothing to be ashamed of. Betraying your friends under torture, you can get away with that. But to betray your friends for pleasure, that is something quite different. And that is what the machine is made for. When her prisoner regains consciousness, Tricia will demonstrate how the machine can accomplish that. It will not be a long wait


    To be continued
    ©Y t D, 2003
    • second installment

      Tue, December 23, 2003 - 10:49 PM
      Tricia does not have to wait too long. Starbuck opens her eyes, tries to sit up, but is reminded by a few soft shocks that she better keep still.
      Tricia smiles. 'Hello. Nice to have you back with us. It's time to explain some other parts of the equipment.'
      Two arms move down from the darkness, and position themselves in front of Starbuck, where she has a good look at them. They seem quite inoffensive, just an robot arm, terminating in an rounded triangle of black material. two by three inch the rest of the story.
      Starbuck just watches, still recovering from the blast the restraints gave her. Tricia touches her control pad, and says ; 'This is the demo mode, it shows what it can do.'
      The arm buzzes softly, and on the base of the rectangular pad a knob begins to form, quite organic. It looks exactly like a snail extending an eyestalk, except this is much bigger.
      The stalk grows, till it becomes a long smooth cylinder, 2 inches across and 10 inches long. Then it changes; It becomes thinner, and instead of straight there is a distinct S-curve. The curve starts to move, like the undulation on a snake's body, ad then it starts to turn. Starbuck looks at the moving stalk, in fascination. Then it stops and becomes straight and rigid again. A very uncertain Starbuck cast a glance at Tricia, who answers with a wicked chuckle. 'Sure, darling, I'll have it do all that to you. but there is much more.'
      Now the surface of the stalk changes, and produces ridges and small knobs. Meanwhile another, smaller stalk forms on the base, and starts making slow circular movements. Starbuck involuntarily smiles when the ridges and knobs start moving in all directions. Then suddenly the ridges become sharp ragged edges, and the knobs take the shape of thorns, each adorned with a tiny electrodes. Starbuck swallows and turns her head away.
      It is Tricia's turn to smile. 'Yep, sometimes the machinery has a gripe. That's the risk.' The thorns disappear, and Tricia moves from where she was standing towards the narrow end of the table. Weary, remembering the pinching she got, Starbuck's eyes watch Tricia's every move.
      Tricia tilts her head a little, and laughs softly. 'Now will you be so kind to position your body in such a way that the massage can begin ?'
      Starbuck hesitates, but notices how Tricia's hand hovers over the control pad. She lifts her hips up, and the massager, as Tricia calls it, positions itself automatically. The procedure seems quite painless, even pleasurable, by the look on Starbuck's face. The other, identical arm is still there. To Starbuck's astonishment, it starts to move too, in the general direction of it's twin. She shouts angrily : 'Damn, Tricia , don't be such a pervert, will you.' But the other arm does not end up where she feared it would. Instead, it moves in a much lower position in front of Tricia, with a small stalk pointing straight up Starbuck opens her eyes wide, as Tricia moves in front of the arm, leans forward with her hands on Star's knees, hiding the stalk from her view.
      Then Tricia closes her eyes, and her face expresses real pleasure. A few seconds later, Starbuck's expression of angry incredulity changes, and she seems to relax too , to enjoy what happens.
      The room is almost silent, for a while. Nothing can be heard but the sound of breathing, and the cyclic buzz and hum of complicated machinery.
      • Commentary

        Wed, December 24, 2003 - 5:18 AM
        Very creative, The thing that I love about collaberation is that people can take a concept I have and make it into something SOooooo much more than what I would have intended it to be.

        A Truly enjoyable read, Thanks bro. I wonder who else might continue the story, what new direction it may turn.
        • Re: Commentary

          Wed, December 24, 2003 - 5:47 AM
          thanks...

          well, up till now I have 6 out of 10 of the "arms" equipped. I have a concept for numbers 7 and 8, which are a pair, and for number nine, which will be a truly complicated thingy... that leaves number 10 ...

          The challenge however is to find the psychological angle...
          we all know that truly mindbending orgasms can be attained in simple ways, but, many people I know, including myself, seldom bother to apply the techniques... just a quick fuck will do, right ?

          how do we conceive the programming of a sexual torturing machine, in a way that it will really bring a person in a state where they will do anything, including betraying her friends (who are by then somewhere in a remote reality), for the little last soft touch that takes her over the edge ?

          to be continued next year...


          • Re: Commentary

            Wed, December 24, 2003 - 7:28 AM
            Addiction is the means to ensure the betrayl

            It wouldn't be a process over hours, but more like days or weeks.

            I mean, in fantasy but not in reality that I know of, brainwashing is a pretty strictly behaviorist process. Good behavior is rewarded, rewards witheld or punishment for behaviors not encouraged. The brainwasher when interrogating seldom asks for the information they want right away. The first stage is to merely establish domininance, then dependency, then trust... when trust is established then orgasms can be immense and information extracted fairly easily.

            It is well documented that even without sexual stimuli captives often fall in love with their captors, or at least start to sympathize with them.

            If I were in the shoes of the captor, I'd continue giving orgasms, pampering, but asserting dominance repeatedly. I'd build a relationship when desires are sated. One mechanical arm could even supply food of esquizite quality and the other drink. Hunger and thirst when such are withdrawn are pretty old fashioned motivators for animals as well as people. But in the beginning my focus would be comfort and pleasure.

            Then, I'd share things about myself and my feelings calculated to feign vulnerabity and trust towards the captor, with feigned reluctance. Almost in a pantomime that I wish I hadn't. The captive perceiving this "crack" in the armor may attempt to open this vulnerability more. Between that, the dominance, pleasure and dependency, they wouldn't be able to help but become endeared to the vulnerability.

            Moments would be staged, of closeness, intimacy.

            and then...

            And then I suppose if I were the captor I'd surpisingly end the status quo, after perhaps months. Withhold the pleasure, no pain, no nothing. Perhaps enough water, that's it. I'd claim that I was wrong about them, that they are not who I thought they were, that the captive is disgustingly manipulative, and cares nothing about me and I'd pretend to be utterly hurt, stiff, distant.

            Usually after dependency, pleasure, delusions of intimacy with a captor, when the captor withdraws in such a manner, then the captive will speak truely and willingly.

            It would be an ironic twist if Starbuck did so, really hoping to be on good terms and such with her captor, expecting the orgasms again. Not even remembering anymore that she betrayed her people but only trying not to betray the only person left that has any relevance to her life... that she'd be confronted with the bland fact that the captor has no feelings for her anyway other than amusement. That there was no love, no reconciliation, just a willing decision to betray her own people.

            The machine would turn off, leaving her in a dark room to think about what she did.
            • 7 of 10, part A

              Sun, January 11, 2004 - 11:32 PM
              The room is almost silent, for a while. Nothing can be heard but the sound of breathing, and the cyclic buzz and hum of complicated machinery.
              This goes on a while, till Tricia pushes forward, pulling herself loose from the pleasure device.
              Starbuck looks up, her expression changing to disappointment, and then to fright, when some touches to the control panel make the twin instrument pull away too
              Tricia remains where she is, breathing deeply. The look in her eyes is very strange - a mixture of adoration and mischief. 'Star, darling, there is something I like very much… let me explain…' One new spidery arm moves in position in front of the prisoners face, the two massagers move each to a side, where they are in her view. Starbuck lies still, waiting for whatever will come. The new instrument looks quite simple : a black ellipse with a little bud in one focal point, and a depression on the other. Tricia whispers : 'Lick it, love…' Starbucks eyes narrow, but she learned to obey. She licks the shining black surface then exclaims in surprise 'oh… it's sweet' 'Tricia chuckles 'Yep.. it's food and drink… the only food and drink you're going to get in a long while… lick, and look at the other arms, darling'.
              Starbuck obeys. Her eyes grow quite wide when she sees the flat stalks appear on the other arms, other tongues that imitate the movement of her own tongue. She stops licking, looks in growing abhorrence at her torturer. Tricia pushes a button. Two arms move back into their previous positions.
              Starbuck closes her eyes, for an unknown reason finding this too much really. Tricia laughs and says 'If you don't lick it, it will get somewhat larger, and soft, and cover your mouth and nose. And if you don't lick then, the machine has other ways of persuasion. Shocks and so, and sharp points, you remember? And you will disappoint me, and that's something you really don't want to do, Starry.'
              With eyes shut, tears running, Starbuck starts to lick the shining pad. Tricia's eyes close too, but for totally other reasons. Star is going crazy. The sweet juice, the traumatic experience, the touch of the soft black stalk, it all combines into a mindshattering mixture of emotions, till finally she bites the black pad, and bites again, again, in a mad rage that is compounded with the pain the imitation machine is causing her. Tricia is loosing control too. The pad that touches her has not imitated the biting, but switched to a simple pattern of gentle caresses. Tricia moans loudly, when the stalk's touch and the oh so exiting sight of Starbuck going crazy finally takes her over the edge.

              **********

              I think i'll just take this out of the " galactica" contexts, and change it into a storyline. and eliminate the restrictions, while i'm at it. I wonder if I could put it in a the basement of an LA mansion ? after all, all the gadgets are shelf items from GE Fanuc and HP... Or on a texan ranch ?

              ***********

              Any markets for such stuff ?

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